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January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was very hot. Nicely done, and with great imagination. Thank you for sharing.
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was beautifully written. Very strong, lusty imagery, and boy was it sexy! I have to admit, I love the more richly written smut as compared to the crudely worded, jack-rabbit style most people write (though I've written a few!) And don't feel alone, I'm female, and I've always written better M/M and F/F than F/M. In fact, some have asked me if I was male after reading some of my stuff, cause it was so good...( now if only I could bring myself to post some of my stuff!) Anyway! I loved it, and I look forward to more of your writing, I hope!
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dfb
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Got an idea, what you could now is have Raoul go back to Christine or even have Erik go and fuck Christine anyway. That would be totally great! lol I sound like a complete perv now don't I? lol
I think your witing style is really good and I think you descbed it all very well. Congrats on a great phic!
Jo!
~x~
I think your witing style is really good and I think you descbed it all very well. Congrats on a great phic!
Jo!
~x~
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Finally some Erik/Raoul slash!
Really enjoyed this..*fans self*VERY hot!
Really enjoyed this..*fans self*VERY hot!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... You certainly made my day, I've been looking all over the place for some Phantom slash and much to my delight, not only found some but so wonderfully written as well. Never in a million years would I have guessed that this was your first time writing slash. Your writing style is a sheer pleasure to read with its poetic and thoroughly thought out lines and sentences. You absolutely seduce your readers, well, at least the ones with an appreciation for the English language.
I'm not entirely sure if the second chapter has been cut in the middle, as sometimes happens on the site because the ending seemed slightly abrupt. While the story is lovely the way it is, I really hope that you'd continue it some day. It started out so thoroughly and it would be a pity for such a beginning to end with so little drama.
I'm not entirely sure if the second chapter has been cut in the middle, as sometimes happens on the site because the ending seemed slightly abrupt. While the story is lovely the way it is, I really hope that you'd continue it some day. It started out so thoroughly and it would be a pity for such a beginning to end with so little drama.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1) Long before, I never ever thought to imagine Raoul and Erik...in this manner.
2) Now...O_O...DAMN!
3) =Heads to store to buy roses in every color=
4) Is Christine ever gonna join them in a threesome?
2) Now...O_O...DAMN!
3) =Heads to store to buy roses in every color=
4) Is Christine ever gonna join them in a threesome?
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY..........you should contiinue this fic. it has WONDEFULL potential!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bondage. Mmmmmm. Good one, I love it!