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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ya know, this reminds me of one of my stories on ff. It's called Alone. Sort of follows the same pattern as this, only...shorter and w/ less words and plot...I think so anyway. -srugs- Good. Leaves off kind of abrubtly though. So there's technially room to continue, but it can also end here and be just fine. So. It's good. -nods- I like it. Mostly. I'm more of a happy story person. But this has a semi-happy ending so I'm all good.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Wow, this story was really depressing. But I liked it, and I hope you write more AH stories in the future. XDXD
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHHHOOoooooooooooowwwwww . . . that was weird and TOO TOOO TOOOOOOOO CLOSE, ARTEMIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay . . . I think I'm good. In truth that was really well done, creepy but truly well done! Keep up the great writing please!!!!!
Okay . . . I think I'm good. In truth that was really well done, creepy but truly well done! Keep up the great writing please!!!!!
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I liked this very much, even though it was super depressing at first. You really are a brilliant writer, even though I don't exactly approve of slash. I wish you would post this on ffnet and continue it.
O.R.
O.R.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more please more more
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice...but I think you could do more with it. I personally would like to see Holly's reaction if she notices the cuts...
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shit...... I don't think anyone who hadn't tried to commit suicide before would know that much about it.
I don't know what to say, except maybe bravo. You open up people's eyes with works like this, so they know what people who feel this way(myself included) go through
thank you...
friend
I don't know what to say, except maybe bravo. You open up people's eyes with works like this, so they know what people who feel this way(myself included) go through
thank you...
friend
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, it was pretty good. Could be better though, if it had another chapter, perhaps?
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!!!!!!
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story.