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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was excellent! You absolutely NEED to continue this story. It's very arousing.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue please! Hurry!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, i love your lord of the rings fan fic, and your labyrinth fan fic, but this is taking the cake! (although, raalia would if you would finish the story!!lol.) kweep writing
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O What a horrible thing to leave me hanging, so to speak! It's so hot! Write more! i love rapey!Wonka ^^; Through slightly out-of-character, it does make for some exciting stories! So.. yes.... next chapter!!!! Hurry! O_O
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What a great story. You have totally captured Wonka's evil/dark side... and I must say I LOVE IT! I was actually thinking about writing a N/C Wonka fic. myself, but was afraid of what people might think. Thanks to you, I see that everyone seems to really like a change, so I might be putting my story up as well. Anyways great job and please update soon.
-EvilCookie
-EvilCookie
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheres the next part???!!!! I need this fic! Its the best thing I have ever read in my life!
Please, please, please update soon! I love it so much! Its too hot to describe!
Please, please, please update soon! I love it so much! Its too hot to describe!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhh! That's a bit scary! But I still love Mr. Wonka. Really can't wait to see what would happen next. And what will Sarah be end up? Love your work so much!!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooohhhhh!! This third chapter got me oh...so...hot! I'd sure love to feel that hair brushing the inside of MY thighs. And, don't get me started on that luscious mouth...
I'm salivating for more of this one!!
I'm salivating for more of this one!!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"But then perhaps I would keep better track of things if I didn’t keep eating the planners...." That is SO Wonka!!
Oh....!! Dang, why do I wish I was Laila??
Oh....!! Dang, why do I wish I was Laila??
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! this is soooo awesome! I love how you've captured the darker side of Willy, everyone portrays him as a happy chipper almost childlike character, i've been wanting to write about his darker side too. THis is great, don't stop writing, i love to read this!