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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP! I NEED MORE OF THIS FIC!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In spite of the N/C situation, I found myself working up a bit of, uh, moisture on this one. I quite agree with the previous reviewer on your having his manner of speaking and acting nailed down! Hey Angel, can I sneak into the factory with you??!!?? Maybe he'd do the same thing for an older, experienced woman like me...
Also, I must confess that I found the Oompa-Loompas' undressing her to be a little bit of a turn-on, so I guess I'm liking the "weird & twisted" so far!
Bravo!! More, more, more!!!!!
Also, I must confess that I found the Oompa-Loompas' undressing her to be a little bit of a turn-on, so I guess I'm liking the "weird & twisted" so far!
Bravo!! More, more, more!!!!!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this! You have his way of speaking and acting down very well. Can't wait to read more!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*totally transfixed* ...
..mmm... more...
..mmm... more...
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so good! if only his factory was in MY town n i knew that THAT was what happened 2 girls who snuck inside lol...please keep writing!!!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ nice chapter... can't wait for more
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! And funny. I v. rarely comment, but that was brilliantly silly and enjoyable. Write more!
xoxoxDolly
xoxoxDolly
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you have to update soon, I have to read more!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE write more! your writing style rocks!
you have me pretty hooked too =B
you have me pretty hooked too =B
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic has great potential...please say you're gonna finish this!!!