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I wonder why I'm surpriced to find your name at one of the storyes I like best. :P I hope you'll write more on this story, 'cause it's turning out to be quite interesting methinks. (I'm too hentai for my own good I know.)

'And I called your name like an adicted to cocain calls for the stuff he'd rather blame' Know what name I'd call? The name of your story! :P Promis you mail me when you post a new chapter? And do hurry up! *Waits in anticipation*

wow. Just....wow. I acutally understood why they enjoyed the magic room so much. Your stories are amazing. They all are. The way you just weave together words of a story together, it's truely amazing. Wow. I loved the ending. The part where Charlie and Willy's demenor changed everytime they visited the room...^_^ and honestly, I never actually considered Charlie/willy wonka as a pairing...but ya know....it fits. Hey, what can I say? I'm very open minded. Whatever works. I loved the idea of Willy having a dark side to him. ^_^ Very nice. PLEASE continue on writting stories like this. The world needs more talented writters like you.

May I say that that was wonderfully beautiful and twisted and gave me everything I needed out of story. Even though I would usually go for hardcore smut slash I find myself loving this story from the bottem of my heart.
What can I say...I've become addicted to.

~Ryoko

That was the hottest thing I've read all day. It was so painfully twisted, I love it. It has a lot of style going for it which makes you side with Wonka. I think my breath caught in my throat a few times. It was wonderful.

Disturbing a some points I must say but I enjoied it alot heh... ok i'm a strange person but isn't everyone? Well written ^^ Good job!

Man, I'm quite impressed, but disturbed. Normally fanfic doesn't freak me out anything like this, but your story's genuinely scary. Your writing's very imaginative and vivid. I think you should branch out, though- you'd make a great short story writer, but you might have to leave out slash to get published, sadly. Good luck with writing in the future- I hope you keep it up.

Really like it! Hope you write more!

dude...that was like....wow. so good. i loved the ending. keep up the good work!!