rate_review Reviews

Hey! I reviewed the other one that was up lol! Oh well!
I would really like to stay with this story and see where it ends!
So in order to accommodate me doing this, I'd like to see more chapters!!!
I've already got some suspicions on the next chapter from that chapter's conclusion,
so hurry and post some more!!!

Mwahz! Luv Skimbleshanks!
xxxMeowxxx

1) Fat paragraphs need to be shortened and split.
2) Some sentences tend to be too long and redundant. Ex-A sentence will say the same things twice.
K bye.

Please remove clone of this tale.