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for Better Than Chocolate

by JackieLeep

schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi y'all! It's the author here.

I can't resist sharing a line from a Missy Elliott song I heard again a couple of days ago that reminded me of Anon's review: "Sex me up and make me say, "Blah, blah, Blah!" I know that the line that Anon is referring to sounds a bit silly, but, to bastardize the words of Art Linkletter, "Grownups say the darndest things when they're having sex..."

Thanks to everyone for reviewing both of my stories. I really didn't expect to have so much positive feedback, to be honest. I'm looking for any honest and constructive feedback I can get. It's good to know that I'm getting reactions, whatever they may be, from my stories. I expect to have another story up within the next couple of weeks or so.

Romska Noch/Gypsy Night

person WillyWonkaIsMySweetCandyMan
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* whoa WHoa WHOA! That was uber hot! I think i need to use the bathroom now lol


Well written!


WWIMSCM
person SisterErotica
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O OMG! that was hot! I only got to read part of it but it was pretty sexy! I should have you write the sex screen for my stories LOL
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Ohhh, yes Willy, you sweet...fucking...candy man! Give it to me hard!"

You are completely fucking insane.....please tell me your'e trying to be funny.
I am now laughing my arse off and my flatmates are all going to read your story over my shoulder.
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe it's cause I haven't seen Johnny Depp and I am just picturing Gene Wilder in your porny fic.

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