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I read this a while back thinking you were going to go in a slightly different direction, but this worked. It was true there was one odd, long stare in that movie and it seemed like Wonka enjoyed this man's demise most of all. I liked how you characterized Mr. Salt's thoughts, they were amusing and very in character; Wonka as a teasing dandy from his point of view. And the bit about the "Hm, salty". HA! That made it worth the read. For some reason, I liked Mr. Salt saying "good boy" to Willy the most. That was a curious turn of roles, yet plausible. You deserved at least one more review - so, there ya go.

*snort* That was the funniest, awesomest thing I have ever read! XD XD XD I always knew that Willy/Salt was a good pairing. I mean, it's even there in the old version! Heeheeheehee... Thanks so much for finally bringing this hilarious pairing into light! XD
God, the "Salt..." comment was sheer brilliance. XD

WOW. This is the most intriguing story I've read in a long, long time! WOW. I am absolutely hooked-this is too good, loved your descriptions of Wonka, loved everything!!! I'll be coming back everyday to see if you've written anything else! I do hope you continue this!!!!!!