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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED it! Sooo cute how they interact together, and I love how Peter is such a comfort to Edmund. I only wish the bedroom scene had been longer...and more detailed....:D it was hot!
There needs to be more Peter/Edmund out here. Can you write more?
There needs to be more Peter/Edmund out here. Can you write more?
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this! You have got me hooked onto this pairing! Thank you so much for introducing me to it!
I just wish this were rated R....:D
I didn't think that chapter 2 served the story much. But the relationship between these two is adorable. I like Edmund's darker personality and Peter's joy and sunshine. I can see them being like that, they seemed like that in the books.
I am so glad that Peter liked Edmund back, because in the first chapter I thought it was unrequited love. I really love the last part...except I wanted more details on what they were doing. =3 Lovely fic! I shall check out that Narnia Slash community. :D
I just wish this were rated R....:D
I didn't think that chapter 2 served the story much. But the relationship between these two is adorable. I like Edmund's darker personality and Peter's joy and sunshine. I can see them being like that, they seemed like that in the books.
I am so glad that Peter liked Edmund back, because in the first chapter I thought it was unrequited love. I really love the last part...except I wanted more details on what they were doing. =3 Lovely fic! I shall check out that Narnia Slash community. :D
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O
I like it. >:D
Like, you cant describe how much a do. I searched everywhere for a story like this! ^_^
continue, continue!! >:D
I like it. >:D
Like, you cant describe how much a do. I searched everywhere for a story like this! ^_^
continue, continue!! >:D
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...Just beautiful... *Wipes the tears off her face* They're so adorable together! Ed and Peter sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Oh I love it how you made them so... lovesick? It gets my attention! I'm also wondering why the Lucy and Susan don't even suspect a thing... Naive maybe? XD
Hope you update it soon, because this is AWESOME,
Ari
Hope you update it soon, because this is AWESOME,
Ari
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story that I have read with this pairing, and I have to say that you’ve sparked an interest in me. I don’t normally read incest, but this is very interesting. The story flows very well, and the characters don’t seem to have clichéd speeches. Keep up the good work! ^^ And do update soon, I’m itching to find out what happens after this.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! They re so cute together. i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter *hinthintnudgenudgewinkwink* update soon...please? i'll never stop reviewing as long as you keep writing. it's a win-win situation! so come on...you know you wanna update for good ol' Jaklyn!
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm...confused. Your second chapter is kind of the same as the first one. Was this intentional?
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please continue this fic. It's pretty good.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG update really really soon I love it!
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:paws: Please write more! What you've got thusfar is great. ^_^