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for Oh, Lolly, Lolly

by BrandiDelain

person Anon
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. ^.^ I love the detail you put into it. It's wonderful when you read something and you can picture everything in perfect detail in your mind. I love the way you write. Keep it up! :)
person Neonette
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the use of humor in this story! Wouldn't mind hearing about more of Wonka's dirty sexscapades in this style!
person Finality
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was quite delightful. and very hot. excellent job~

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person Mesopotamia
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A bit out of character for him but who the hell cares! How can a story be hot, clever, and funny at the same time? This was very well written!
person Shimmeree
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't seen the movie yet, but this is fabulous. That sucker was truly enjoyable.
person anasazi
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To quote:
Oh god, don't stop!!
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my freakin' god! That third chapter was one of the hottest damn oral sex scenes I've ever read! (My undies sure are wet right now!) I do wish there was more, though! I wanted to read some more action with that cock of his! I wanted her to get to fuck him, too. (Okay, I'll cool down now...)

I'll never view a lollipop the same way again... Hot damn! That was one sizzling read!
person Justine
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovin it! continue please?
person Frodo
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful writing. I liked it a lot. :D

Good job, keep writing.

x3 Aeron Rhiannon
person katie
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAH! That was awesome! Are you going to continue?? Please!

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