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One of the most moving and intense stories I have ever read. I cannot wait until the next chapter!! PLEASE update soon, this is the most exciting story I've ever read!!!! You are a fantastic writer, drawing in readers easily and efficiently!!! Great work!! FYI-Adore the way Peter is, you write him very well!! Awesome story please update soon!!!!

Magnificent chapter and I really love how this is developing. I can't wait to read more; I love all the emotion in this story. Keep up the extremely excellent work.~Sophia

Wonderfully written! I love the way you have developed this story and I really can't wait to read more. Keep up the very good work and please update soon.~Sophia

WOW!!!! Let me guess, you wrote the script for the movie? It fit so well into place. I loved it!! But one thing, The part with Edmund ready to give himself up, I dont think Jadis would have glady taken him. She would be too content with having Aslan than to take Ed.

OMFG that was soooooooooooooo sad. how exactly are you gonna continue this? I cant wait to see because this is an awesome start.