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*blushes* this is real hot! better read the next chapter.

Yes!!! I want more!! please!!! God it would be great to see JC and Richard together.

This story is very hot. Please add another chapter soon.

You'd deserve this reviwe simply for writing this fic, you know that? aff.net is a huge archive and right now yours is the only Anita Blake story in here. Which is just wrong and I guess oyu see my point. ^^x
So: first of, it's a little irritating to read Jean-Claude being shortened to JC. I must admit that I only realized you did it after a few paragraphs because I tend to call him that, too. *laughs* Other than that it's nice to have a point of view other than Anita's for once. seeing that ths fic is mostly about JC and Richard it's kinda the only *possible* POV because Anita would be a bystander and Richard would myke my head explode with his (self) doubt. o_Ox It would take *days* to put his thoughts into words; JC accepts himself and their relationship better, so his thoughts are clearer.

I searched the world wide web for nice, nc-17 rated fanfics, but came up with a very disappointing amount, so every piece I find is a reason for great joy. XD You made my day with this, especially since I just finished Cerulean Sins and have to wait two days or so for the next book to arrive (*hits herself for nor ordering sooner*). Please keep up the great work! ^_^x

~jeanne

I like this, it's really good so far. It seems that its more of a Richard/Jean claude fic-which is an interestly cute couple-than an anita/jean claude, but i guess i'll have to keep reading to find out, update soon please

I really enjoyed this POV scene. Everyone was in character and it really felt right. Nice job.

hey, good ficlet! It was sexy, and you write well, and I enjoyed seeing Jean-Claude's point of view on the event. (ohh, I would love to see them become a true threesome in the books, but no T_T so glad there are fics to do it instead.)

If I may nitpick, though? using abbreviations instead of the full word is kind of jarring. I know triumvirate can be annoying to type out many times in a row, but TRI doesn't mean anything. Same with Jean Claude and JC -- he doesn't refer to himself as JC; I don't think anyone in the books actually calls him JC; I was wondering who you were alking about. Might I suggest you write with the abbreviated versions (JC, tri) and then do a search and replace? I was thrown out of the story a couple of times because of that, and I almost stopped reading, which would have been too bad because it's a good fic aside from that little thing.

(oh and wolf = loup. XD Loupe means magnifying glass. XD)

I wonder if you're going to write more. I know i'll read it if you do. ^____^

I read it back at PdS, but I haven't reviewed it there. I hope you are still thinking in doing a sequel, because I'd read it eagerly.

Is this story finished? Nice pov of JC and his feelings for Richard.