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Jenny_Wren,

Long-time reader, but I've never reviewed (first and foremost, I forgot my username. Secondly... well, I mostly read and don't feel the need to review - offensive, I know, as I'm a writer myself, but I just can't bring yourself to do it). Moving on from that - your story is absolutely beautiful. I prefer short stories normally, but your extensive delving into the complex relationship between Erik and Raoul that you have created, accompanied by stunning prose and a believable, exciting (to say the least) story, is addicting.

I'd just like to thank you for taking time and effort and emotion to write this story - both for yourself, of course, and for the readers. I look forward to the next chapter, again and again. This is a story I can read over and over again (well - perhaps more parts then others ;] ).

I guess I don't have much more to say.

- TwistedLemon

oh i just love this story but half the tie i feel bad for roual and then erik it just switches back and forth. but any ways i look forward to seeing the next update.^_^

Yay, a new chapter. I was a littre worried with the end of the last chapter and I hope to read more from you soon.

Wow, I love what you are doing with this story, it's great ..

Your story is very entertaining.I never thought I'd read a Phantom of the Opera slash fiction but this has caught my interest and refuses to let go! I haven't read any of the Phantom of the Opera books but I have seen the musical a few times and the movie of the musical that came out a few years back so I was worried that I wouldn't be able to fallow the story line. To my delighted surprise I could fallow the story line and easily digest the new facts added into what I all ready knew. I feel a connection to Erik in a way I never thought I would and Raoul has more depth than I ever could have imagined. I do have to say that I am a stickler for historical accuracy and while most of your story is very accurate some of the dialog sounds rather modern. I would love to see more of this story and if you can tweak the dialog a little this could easily become one of my favorite fics!

Really nice chapter, very hot and cute

This story keeps getting better and better. There is a great joy everytime I see that you posted a new chapter so thanks you for sharing.

Awsome as always,thanks for writing this

That was SO beautiful... damn, the blood seems to have rushed to the 'important' place, I'm feeling shivers everywhere else. You are a truly talented writer.

This was beautiul, well written!