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aaaaaahhhh i love it. HOT. and very in-character too. please please update!!

You are a talented writer. I love this story~! Basically, I can't wait for the next chapter.

i'm definitely still reading this. can't wait for another chapter

great chapter! Please keep updating

I absolutely love your story! I see that you have taken advantage of the rather open ending to the book and developed a unique storyline...rather *really* well too! I love how you portrayed both Ralph and Jack's grown up characters. I first read this story a few weeks ago, and today I was just wondering what were the chances that you updated--and look!!!! The sex scene in this chapter wasn't only hot, but also one of the most emotionally charged ones I've read. I'm glad you updated and I hope you keep on writing (but take your time,...I'm not rushing you) :)

~joy0707

Huzzah, a new chapter! Deliciously shmexy and oh so well written. Best LotF slash story in my opinion ;)

wow, that last chapter was way intense. write more?

More more more more more more more more please!!! This story is amazing, please plase continue, I beg you!

Me, i really love TLOTF, its awesomeness. I love the connection between Ralph and Jack on the island.
THis story is awesome! I LOVES IT! It's a good development i think, from teen to adultsyness...i want some action between those two or else ill scream! I LOVE THIS...jack should be with ralph til the end of time! VIVO EL LORD OF THE FLIES!

Please don't abandon this story, its so powerfully written and would be a great loss to the fandom if you didn't contine.
Plus I wanna see what happens between Jack and Ralph, update update!!!!