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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOw OMG, its taken me a week to read this, i love your story, i would have reviewed more if i had discovered it sooner. please say your gonna write more, thats a cliffhanger ending, what about the bad guy, does he die? i wanna see the babay. please do more.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
* Hey, for the last couple days I've been trying to get on your web site, but it appears to be down. Just thought I'd pass it along.* Keep up the great work.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch.36 I loved this chapter. Soooo Nathaniel's married to his fav author (grin). I think he's gonna be annoying Jase on the next book.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch38. (Deep growl at Anita) This don't look good. Anita a sore looser? How woulda figured. (grin)
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 39. Awwwwwwww. Jamil's obviously hasn't spent much time around kids, if he didn't know they were very active. LOL. And that was nice getting him and Shang-da together, that surprised me.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ch 41. Damn (grin) another twist. Micah and Sara? Wow. If Anita was about to go over the edge, this'll really do a number. This is . . wow. Keep up the fantastic work.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 42. Wow. Okey, first part. LOL. Oh, that is gonna be some "little" Micah's gonna have with Elias (grin). Second. Who's the bad guy gonna go after first? Caleb? Jason? Nate? Jase? Wow, I just can't wait for the next chapter.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your web site is the first page I hit to check on new chapters. I love this series, I can't wait for the next chapters.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15. What can I say that I haven't already? (Grin). I bookmarked your site first thing, now when I get some free time I'll have to check the stories over a little closer. You and your co-auther keep up the fantastic work.
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14. Hey sorry for the waaaaay late review, work again. This was a really touching chapter. I soo hope that Jason can patch things up with Caleb, that first part chocked me up a little. Then had to laugh at Elias' antics with Richard and his aunt, think he's gonna be a handful for them (grin). Anyways, looking forward as always for the next chapter.