rate_review Reviews

hey this was very well done are you going to continue it id like to read more.

Sorry if you guys didn't enjoy it. I did this one because of a request on another site, and figured I'd post it here as well. To be honest, I'm not a fan of rape stuff, and I can certainly see how that would come through and ruin the writing style for some people. Even making it simply a dream, at the end, didn't make the story appealing to me either.

Perhaps the lesson I should take from this is, don't write stories I don't want to write. Anyway, I'm working on a Mat fic at the moment, so hopefully this was just a single lapse.

I don't know what to say......I mean, I feel very bad for Egwene. But I'm hoping you still working on another story.

Update.

Excellent WoT story again! You have managed to capture Egwene's nature perfectly with your last sentence. Keep up the good work! And if I may ask, would you consider doing Rand+Avi or Rand+Min as you already wrote Elayne's first time...?