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May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a fair job of capturing the aftermath - the torn emotions that result from such violation, as well as the rift that is created between the victims. I like that you addressed the emotional trauma that they are both experiencing as a result of the events of their capture, as it's seldom addressed with regards to rape.
Your characters have a good deal of substance, even in this small tidbit, and I appreciate that you've shown this moment.
Thank you for sharing this, and happy writing to you.
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I still haven't finished the whole book, much less the whole series... but this seems to fit right in.
Beautifully done. And a very enjoyable read.
Beautifully done. And a very enjoyable read.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, how I love Cobweb... It's been a while since I read these books. A Wraeththu section exists now, though, so you might consider moving this there for more exposure.