rate_review Reviews

Yay! I was hoping you would update soon! I think it would be great to be able to fit inside a dollhouse. I love where this story is going, keep up the great writing!!

AWESOME! Please continue! this is a very intriguing story! I can't wait for more!

I think the structure is ok, but your Watson voice is rather stilted and doesn't quite flow properly. I enjoy the thought obviously put in the story, but I think some more thought could be put in the pacing and movement to better capture the good doctor's voice properly. Sorry if this discourages; it isn't meant to. It's meant to be helpful.

This is interesting -- Keep writing!

Please update soon! I love H/W stories and yours is interesting!