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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can i just say wanted to start this review off chanting "I wanna take the challenge" over and over again but i cant. Im in damn shock, seriously, how can you write that good? Write more, i dont care what, you could write hello for all i care just write more. Wow those words were so powerful and there aint enough Tanya Huff fics, but this. Oh my god, the fire stone is a classic and it kills me that i've only got it in that omnibus edition which is really really annoying. And now i'm rambling which means i definitely like this. I only ramble when i love a story. Please write something else, maybe a smoke story? If you like em. but definitely write another fire stone. Im still in shock.
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, now that was nice~! ^_^ You used words I absolutely -love- but never really see (interim! Culmination! =3), and while sometimes they seem like maybe a little too much- and the otherall style gets a little stiff at times, where the fancy prose gets in the way of actually outlining a description or action or emotion- the general -tone- is almost perfect. The lack of slang and vulgar terms was refreshing, the romance was overall well done, and Aaron accepting his God again was a great touch. =3 The dialogue seemed sometimes a little -too- perfect, expecially Dar's, but it was cute and made me smile, so that's alright. ^^
Either way, well done! ^_^
Either way, well done! ^_^