rate_review Reviews

Amazing story. You captured Erik beautifully. Very well written, the words just flowed together with no awkward transitions. Truely a treat to read. I look forward to your future works.

Im not sure if ur still reading the reviews for this fic or not. this is a great story i love it. but question first. Im sure uv read lots of books( none in particular) how would u feel if in the middle of a story the author pauses and starts to tell u about his/her life? well in your case i was slightly irratated by the fact that u had to tell us wat was happening in ur life. ur a/n were almost as long as the chapter u put them in. a suggestion for futher fic- if u want to add an a/n make it short and simple
ex: a/n: Sorry it took so long to post chapter. Enjoy.

im not trying to seem rude but i know as a reader i want to read the story not the a/n. if u really feel the need to tell ur readers about ur self then put a chapter before or after the story.

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This is afascinating read. I am truely enjoying the progress of the relationship between Mia and Erik. I do have one criticism. In earlier chapters, there are odd typos or mispellings that lead one to question what you were trying to communicate. I realize that this might be a little late in getting to you, but I felt that it was important to point out. I would suggest, assuming you do not already have one, employing a "Beta" to pre-read and edit for grammar what you intend to post. If you do not have a Beta, please email me. I would be overjoyed to assist in helping you finetune this fantastic story!

Much Love,
Marti

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