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for Power of a Memory

by Dhalim

person Pheobi
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so...I read your story (despite the fact that I originally didn't intend to) because I think it's rude to review a story you haven't read. I liked it, actually. It was different and slightly odd, but I liked it. I don't understand how Peter was able to fly again...but that's okay. To be honest, I never really understood how Peter could fly in the first place, so I'm not too worried about it.

Now, on to the purpose of my review. You reviewed a story I wrote (a Snarry story called "Chelicerata") and I was checking your profile for an e-mail address to add you to the update list. Instead I came across the link to your "I Wish" challenge. I responded, but had some questions. So if you could pop over, read my response, and shoot me an e-mail with the answers to my questions so I can write your story, I'd appreciate it. I wasn't sure if you check that post anymore (since it's old) and I didn't have an e-mail address for you (hence finding the post in the first place) so I figured this was the best way to contact you. So...yeah. Please recheck that "I Wish" post and get back to me!

Sincerely, ~ FallenAngel
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
seriously, i hope you to write a sequel. this was, well... MY GAWD!
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sex scene was too short. Not smutty enough! >:C Good concept though.
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
full story

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