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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know, normally I really hate stories with an OC as a main character. But this was really good. The language and the tension between Laura and Hook was more than good enough to distract from the weirdness of a 21st century girl appearing in Peter Pan. I liked it. And I'm really really hoping you're going to resolve that tension, really really soon, because I had no idea James Hook so could be so totally hot until I read your fic :)
Looking forward to reading more!
Looking forward to reading more!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What timing, I review it, a new chapter appears! So in great hopefulness I'm reviewing again :) now to be honest, I'm not keen on songs in fics, because I just get bored with them. So, not my favourite part. But the rest was good, more freakin tension :) looking forward to the next part! You have good tone - I can see things when you describe them. Sometimes I have trouble seeing things I've written, let alone what other people have written so it was nice to have clear images coming through :)
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm sure you've already noticed but you've posted the last chapter twice. Can't wait for your next update!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I love this fic!!!
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey im reviewing...keep it up, its good.
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November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, yes, I have been extremely remiss in not reviewing when I demand reviews of my own readers. I love the plot, glad you made Captain Hook hot and not old and ugly as usual (but does he wear the usual girly, prissy clothes?). I like Laura, every bit of feminist in me jumped up and cheered when she kneed Diego where it counts! Overall, well written, although I would like to see longer chapters.
Gaia
Gaia
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
giggles....
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it please post more
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it please post more