rate_review Reviews

All in all i thought you had a really good idea here, but there are a few things that i thought i would point out. For one...what made you decide to spilt Daemon and Jaenelle up? It is plan in all the books that there care for one another and if i recall you made Lucivar say that even Jaenelle had a hard time "getting him to respond" but if you read queen again i think that you will find that is not the case. And i do think that you should read the books again cause you need to work a little on the writing of chacarters. And if Daemon were taking care of a girl's Virgin Night, he wouldnt do it as the Sadist, i dont believe. He doesnt harm people who need him, just the ones that use him.
But really i did like the story i just think that is was a little off in some areas.