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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, I like. You should do an Anita, Asher, Jean-Claude.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very detailed. I like the verbage you used, pretty active voice versus passive. The characterization was good, and I think the characters re-acted as they may have according to the novel. Overall, great work!
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Hot stuff! Very intricate but extremely well written. Would like to read more.
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
terrific use of imagery! good job.