rate_review Reviews

This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. Its very realistic, you are a very talented writer and there are betty few mistakes which make it easier to read. One mistake it's that there are repeat chapters and another is that often i see q instead of g as well as a few gramatical errors such as except instead of accept. All in all this is a marvelous read and I hope to read more soon. One this I wish to note that I feel would make a big difference is the synopsis could be a little more descriptive in order to entice more readers. Keep up the good work.

Your Phan,

ChaiTease

Just found and am loving this story. Please continue and finish it! Preferably in a timely manner!:)

Hi! I'm new here at AFF. I just read your story and thought it was really good. I wasn't real happy at first with the whole idea of Erik being permiscuous, but I was ok with the idea I think after time. However, I am very saddened that the story just stopped! I am quite eager to know what happens at the Picnic that Katherine is going to have AND I want to know how the whole thing ends. Is there any way I can persuade you into posting more? I am very sorry you didn't receive many reviews. I really do wish I had known about fan fiction long before now. I am hoping you are still lingering around on here. If you are, please please please add some more to the story. Pretty please?? Thank you so very kindly!

omg i love this. please please please update. im anxious to see what happens at this party.

I'm enjoying the story a lot, although I do think many of Erik's actions and words are out of character; but I respect that you are, in a sense, reinventing him. Your work could use a little more editing and you tend to be quite verbose, but all in all, a very well-written piece and I am looking forward to reading more. I should add I am only on the 13th chapter, so consider my comments to only include up to that point.

Yes POST MORE!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!! I need my fix. lol You're such a wonderful writer and I love how you've incorporated Native Americans. WOOTIES!! MORE PLEASE!!!!

Whoa that took me a while to read. Its AMAZING!!! As always. I love your story and oooo I always wondered how Erik would seem as a Southern Gentleman. MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

BRAVA!!!!!! I quite enjoy it. Our Ickle Erik is becoming quite the gentleman. eheh I love, can't wait for more. *waits patiently*

De Chapther Review...

AMAZING and poor Erik, that's sad that he could actually get his ass kicked. Oh well, I've been there with him, revenge is so very sweet. Although I opt for some illusion and nice torture. For Mr. Ox, I think a beating would be right. Who lives by his fists should die by his fists.. Ooo.. better, put a punjab around his neck and make Erik use him as a punching bag that he can pull towards him. hehe Sorry, I do have a twisted mind somewhat. Great Chapter! And I know for a fact that that OX guy was Irish, just from how he spoke, etc. Yea, knowing dialect that old is sad, I know. lmao AMAZING CHAPTER! Keep it up!

BRAVA MAGNIFICA!! That was an amazing chapter, once again. Although.. DAMN! Christine is like the bloody plague! I wonder if she has a spy looking for Erik, then when she finds out what city he's in, she purposely tries to go there. Grr! Personally, I hated what she did to him. I still think Erik deserved some happiness, whether from her or not. Though Raoul deserves to die. lol and I bet you her kid came from a second of sex. LMAO! ^_^ hehe MORE MORE MORE!!!! Pwease!