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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are in a word amazing! That was one of the best stories I've read in awhile. Plz write one about Jacob I will beg if I have to don't make me beg *gives puppy dog eyes* Wow you are great!
Keep writing,
Mai Malfoi
*Beautiful Bad Faith*
Keep writing,
Mai Malfoi
*Beautiful Bad Faith*
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July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. I had difficulty breathing through that. That was just how I imagined it would be. Fantastic job! really true to the characters and ms. meyer's writing. really, just fantastic. :) please keep writing more about twilight!
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
amazing!
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July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, can't wait for the next chappy!! ^^
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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even more amazing then the first! I love Virgin!Edward, and his desire to please! Funniest line: (I'm paraphrasing)"I was beginning to see the benefits of turning her into a vampire". HA! And it is here where the man rules the monster! :)
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story~! ^.^ And you stayed as close to the characters as you could while making them FINALLY have sex! *Has been waiting and waiting and waiting from them to do it in the books* Maybe they will do it in the 4th one? It comes out in a few weeks~! *Happy dance*
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I ABSOLUTELY love this story so far! Please write more! :D
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, absolutely fantastic! I love how Edward was thoughtful and caring. And Bella, that girl is quite delicious, isn't she? ;] I loved the whole thing. You did very well with keeping them in character. Awesome job.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how squishy!! I really liked your story. It would be nice if you did continue it. Please update soon so that I might enjoy another chapter! ^^
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! Some decent Twilight Smut! You nailed it perfectly! It was funny, sexy, and canon! Bravo! I'll be looking out for this one!