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December 28, 2024 at 12:00 AM
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June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! That was so frickin hot!!!
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story I must say ... It would be very interesting if Edward walked in on them...seems like a good second chapter, maybe a little threesome action?
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was terrific Laura, a great piece on what would have happened in that scene in the book if Steph Meyer wasn't determined to keep it G/PG. I hope you write again soon, you have talent. Thanks.
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Out of character for both Bella and Jacob, not enough build-up and the dialogue was embarrassing. Keep it up though, because there's lots of room for improvement.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please let there be a round two coming soon!!
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not that big of a fan of J/B stories. but this on was awesome!!!! I loved it. Keep up the work. I think you should have a part two. If you do let me know please.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing piece of work. The descriptions were perfect, and I'm glad to see someone took that certain scene further... I absolutely adored it!
You are an excellent author, and can't wait to read more from you
You are an excellent author, and can't wait to read more from you