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December 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so it was very chaste...but the sweetness made up for it! I love Tumnus 'reclaiming what's his", heheheh, and Lucy and Edmund's exchange is absolutely adorable. I love that Edmund really has been rolling in leaves...=D
Your fic is one of the best Narnia fics on here, I tell you!
Your fic is one of the best Narnia fics on here, I tell you!
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent beginning! You have nailed the speech of Narnia; I love Edmund's spiel, and Tumnus', too. Great writing!
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh that line at the end of chapter 2! I love it!
but oh...I'm a little sad already...but must keep reading!
but oh...I'm a little sad already...but must keep reading!
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story of how fauns live. That's just how I would imagine it.
These chapteres are too short! I want more!
These chapteres are too short! I want more!
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I wish this fic were less light than it is, I'm sorry...there's just so much potential! All those naids and dryads and whatnot! Oh I would love a scene with Edmund really amongst them....;D
but great going nonetheless! I like their faithfulness to each other.
but great going nonetheless! I like their faithfulness to each other.
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June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lucy is absolutely adorable and devious. I think even just by mention, you ahve characterized Peter and Susan well in their older sibling roles. I like that Edmund and Lu help each other, as the youngers.
More, PLEASE! I want more detailed scenes between Tumnus and Edmund. Please give us that! The mentions you've given were delicious. Can't wait for more!
Please update!
More, PLEASE! I want more detailed scenes between Tumnus and Edmund. Please give us that! The mentions you've given were delicious. Can't wait for more!
Please update!
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent beginning! I am quite intrigued. :D
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic is so cute and simultaneously hot! I would have never thought of this pairing, but I like it.
I can really see Susan and Peter being snotty about it.
I can really see Susan and Peter being snotty about it.
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, this is great! The rites you have described remind of the pagan Beltane festival. Interesting.
Update, update! I can just see TUmnus and Edmund with their crowns of flowers...beautiful.
Update, update! I can just see TUmnus and Edmund with their crowns of flowers...beautiful.