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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually didn't like the beginning paragraph or 2, I thought it was another Twilight remake! But no fear! LOL.
I think it's really good so far. A few words left out here and there. I like the length you have, Please don't leave us hanging for weeks! I can't handle that! LOL.
I love Jasper and Bella combo, it is actually my fav combo, they just seem better suited to me.
You may get a better reaction if you were to post it on fanfiction.net (its WAY more active)
I think it's really good so far. A few words left out here and there. I like the length you have, Please don't leave us hanging for weeks! I can't handle that! LOL.
I love Jasper and Bella combo, it is actually my fav combo, they just seem better suited to me.
You may get a better reaction if you were to post it on fanfiction.net (its WAY more active)
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice start hope you continue