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my review is partly good, partly not so hot, and partly an offer! your story idea is GREAT. but...as has been mentioned, you really need (a) to use spell-checking and better punctuation, or (here's where the offer comes in) a beta! i'm a beta-reader accredited through Perfect Imagination. if you're still looking for someone to beta your fanfiction, i'd definitely be interested! you can reach me at mamacita-san (at) hotmail (dot) com. would you possibly be interested in reposting a beta'd version of your story? it really is good, and i think it would be even more enjoyable to read with some good, thorough checking-over. give a shout if you think so too! hope to hear from you.

pleaseee keep writing!!! i can't take the waiting!!! ugh its driving me insane!!! ppppplllleeeeaasseeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OH.MY.GOSH. please please please keep witing!!! i love this story, and i like how you put it into both perspectives!! so thoughtful and intricate!!! you definatly left me with a cliffhanger!!! please keep writing!!!

peace.

samantha

i really like the story, What do you have planned for next????? i love it.