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by FakeYoueDeathMS

schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor you. :( And evil, evil computer!

Suspense, suspense. I liked it. Almost got goose bumps... creepy, but great!
schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love those angsty, depressing moment. It's not that I like to see the characters suffer (well... I actually do enjoy it, I have to admit *lol*), but it's just more interesting to read than the fluffy sunshine things. ;)
Besides, you killed off Jacob which is always fine with me. Definitely no big Jake fan. Hehe.

And "cock block"?? *lol* Now, thanks. Whenever I hear the name Edward or see him now, I'll have to think of that lovely term. *gets hysterical laughing fit*
You're just too funny (despite those great, angsty chapters)! :)
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh, preview sounds tragic. Should I worry about Mr. Smut-spoiler (cuz that way, he'll NEVER get any smut... *lol*)?? o_O
Glad I made you laugh. Also glad you entertain me so well with your story. See, we're even again. ;)
schedule July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The preview thing is a funny idea. ;)
Please more, chapter 1 was well done (even if Edward is a smut-spoiler).

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