rate_review Reviews

Nicely written! You made the love making seem sensual rather than crass, which isn't always easy. I'd just request you to be a little careful with spell check (e.g "your" V "you're"). Other than that, I like it!

Bella in a skirt... that's like a car with only one tire - of course there just HAS be some accident. ;)

Honestly, I'm so glad you continued. It's such a pleasure to read stories when authors deliver really fine and wonderful lines like yours. ^_^

"sweetcheeks" is just cute. And the smut was breathtaking. Even without the vampire aspect, I wouldn't mind if this would turn into more than a mere one-shot. Really well done! :)
Concerning the british accent I'd say it's a lovely detail of the story. Besides, Rob keeps slipping out of Edward's american accent in the movie at times anyway... ;)

That was seriously so freaking HOT!!!!!! I could totally see you going on with this story, I think it would a lovely AU. It could just be a canon AU with Renesmee, or whatever name you choose. But it definitely has the potential to continue. It could be sweet, sexy, and just romantic. I can see so man things happening for this story.

So my vote is definitely continue, and you can even rewrite with Edward as a vampire, that could work too. You've created such a fresh beautiful canvas to keep adding more vibrant colors to. This could really be a piece of art.

Good luck with whatever you decide. I still love this no matter what and I'm bookmarking the page. :)

~*~*~* ReddTwilight