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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love to watch the way you have woven this prequel - i have read straight through to chapter 22 and now sit (as with your others, like the Necklace and the AU of Dr. Swan) anxiously awaiting your next chapter. I hope that your author's note at the end is true and that you actually do write every night - I am totally captivated by your take on all my favorite characters. Please update soon!
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, I love it, you must update more ; ; *die-hard Edward fan* D: I'll beg you!! I really really wanna know what happens next lol :D ; ; I even made an account here on AFF just so I could review your story lol T.T don't leave your new fan waiting! ; ; /sniffle
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow - loving this story. I ahve always wondered about Edward "pre-bella". And I think you are doing a very nice job of showing the horrors he is going through. Just about to start Chapter 13 . . .
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OK, just finished Chaper 17 - LOVED IT! Emmett was always the most easy going and I love
1 - how he immediately feels about Rose
and
2 - how Edward realizes that there is a reason Carlisle did what he did!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH great chapter!
1 - how he immediately feels about Rose
and
2 - how Edward realizes that there is a reason Carlisle did what he did!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH great chapter!
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May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH - amazing story - am so hooked! Read all 22 chapters today. Please update soon!
I know it will take awhile, but I am excited for when Alice and Jasper make an entrance:)
I know it will take awhile, but I am excited for when Alice and Jasper make an entrance:)
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know I have reviewed your writing 2 other times, but I just can't get over how much of an amazing writer you are!! Chapter 20 was def worth the wait keep em coming!!
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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Perfection, as always. I want to say again that I love your characterization. I especially love the attention Emmett gets, because he's one of my favorite characters and seems to get MUCH less attention that he deserves!
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like everything you have written, love it! You know Edward as well as SM does I swear! I really liked reading about how the other joined the family.
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January 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please PLEASE tell me that there is more to come!!! You are a fantastic writer I think I said that in my last review, but it needs to be said again!!!!
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January 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter is better than the last! It's so very nice to see this wonderful exploration of their early years.