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WONDERFUL!

Emily is my favorite character. She is bold, courageous, brave, tender; and oh gosh...so young. Fido, what a lucky dog! I love how she handles men; and how she deftly whips her slave into shape. Quite a young man’s dream. Oh how, where do I meet girls, or queens like her?

I don't really know what to think about this. It's rather funny to read at times, and I admit the idea is hilariously weird. Being no fan of Dragon Ball Z, however, I find it a bit difficult to actually like and properly get into it. I didn't want to leave you without a review, though.
There's big potential in your writing, definitely (I like your style and how you describe things). But as I said, the genre mix is not my kinda thing. Hope you don't mind my honesty. ;)