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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful - you have a real talent for writing Edward's thoughts, and believe me it's not always done well. I loved getting a look inside his mind at this crucial moment for him x
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you continued! :D I really like your writing. It's like you're getting in Edward's head... Which, you kind of are...
Anyway, I feel honored to read your writing, and I hope you write more. :)
Anyway, I feel honored to read your writing, and I hope you write more. :)
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again, beautiful! By the end of the chapter it was as if Edward himself were thinking. I think you really got into his head with this. Wonderful!
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you put yourself so perfectly well into those characters you write about. You make them seem so… real. And especially the end of chapter 2 was beautifully written. ^_^
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really impressive! O.O I love how you describe Edward's feelings and struggling so well... it's amazing.
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing! I love it. I think you captured Edward perfectly. You could probably even continue it, let us know what he might have been thinking on that oh-so-fateful day. ;)
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! So sad. I love it. WIll you be writing more? I would love to be in Edward's head when he murmurs "Carlisle was right." as he holds Bella in his arms. This was lovely.