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I love it can't wait to see what happens next in the story, and I hope you update soon.

awesome fic it reminds me of my grandma

Each of the chapters that I have read from 17, to 19 were really good. I can't wait to see what happens next in you story, and I hope they do kick Tristian's ass.

This story is getting so good, I can't wait to see what happens next in the story.

I am loving this story! its really entertaining! I am having to stop myself from getting on here everyday to see if you have a new chapter for us.

Honestly I would never considered the possibility of Seth being gay - or at least a guy being in love with him. But it so works in this story. Cant wait to see were you take that story line.

Keep up the good work. And I loved Storks and Wolves.

I loved how this story is going so far, it's getting so exciting reading the chapters in each one. I loved how you did some history in this chapter it was really good. I also hate that Max character very much, and how you made him so evil was pretty good. Also I want to say that I'm sorry for not keeping up with the chapters lately; I had a really busy last week, and my grandfather passed away so that is kind of why I haven't been reading your chapters lately. Which now it really helps, and I hope Leah and the rest of them kick the Makah or whatever they're called asses. And kicking the crap out of Max, and I can't wait to see the next chapter of this story.

I love how this story is going so far, and keep up the good work I can't wait to see what happens next in the story. Also if anyone is reading this could someone read my story that is on here. It would mean a lot to me is someone did, and to know if I need to change anything in the story.

I really like this story. You develop the characters and make them very believeable. I also like your very quick updates. LOL!
But there´s also a little downside. Your spelling. I know it´s one of my personal pet peeves, but especially in this chapter the spelling was sometimes atrocious.

This chapter is really good so far, and I hope nothing happens to Leah when they get there. Also I hope you update soon I would like to see what happens next in the story it's getting really good.

Oh this was a really good chapter, I was like "That son of a bitch" and "Oh hell no they didn't" when I read the part when everyone talked about the other tribe. Then when that asshole Tristain talk to the others in his tribe I was like "Oh you son of a bitch, no you didn't". If I was there I would have kicked his ass so hard he would be crying for his mother. I hope you update soon I would love to see what happens next in the story.