rate_review Reviews

This story is awesome, omg ,its so hot and you are great at writing this. the Jasper part is so sexy.

That was the *best* epilogue I've ever read! Damn that was hot!

Holy shit, man, that was hot, especially the Jasper/Jacob interaction, the smut was so effing hot, and I absolutely loved the way you portrayed Jasper (he’s so sexy, dark and controlling, kudos, hehe), but the Edward/Jacob interaction was pretty great too, very sweet and lastly the Bella interaction was okay, I guess; mostly because, I’m not very fond of threesomes and I’m more of a yaoi fan as of now, oh well…never mind, that, I guess!

More so, to be honest, I must say that I kind of felt, that the epilogue was a bit overrated/unnecessary, but only in the sense that…oh, hell, what I mean is; I thought chapter four was the perfect ending, it was sweet and very final, well, to me at least! Anyway, brilliant trilogy! Hope you write more Edward/Jacob stories and hopefully some Jasper ones as well, just a thought!

Thanks for sharing!

Wow! I completely loved this story. I really would like you to continue it - if anything, even just a threesome. Each scene was as emotionally passionate as it was hot! You're a beautiful writer! Keep up the strong work!

YES YES threesome please!!!!!!

love it!!!! more please!!!!

WOW, throughout this I kept thinking of the burn that comes from both Ice and Fire...shivers up the spine. Poor Jasper, being an emotion sensor, he doesn't stand chance against a seduction from Jacob...