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please post more soon?

AMAZING!!!! that's all I can say. and the book sucks. atleast the last few after the fame soaked into her head and she stole ideals from fanfiction *cough*Renesmee*cough*. keep up the good work and let me know when the book comes out. I shall readeth it.

I was very happily surprised to check this story again and find that there was a rewrite, which was basically a whole new chapter to read. :-)

Yes, the way Barlie reacts in this chapter is definitely him. *sigh* Oh, Barlie.

Still, the slash lover in me *loved* the end bit with Barlie and Ethan, even if Barlie is convinced his heart isn't in it. I hope he'll come to his senses soon enough. Great chapter! :D

Aww, Barlie fell asleep on Ethan. ^_^

I'm really happy that things seem to be heading in a good direction for these two. I'd say I can't wait to see what happens next, but I'm behind and have one more chapter to read. ;)

I agree with Lizzie. I think Bella would take it well if Barlie came out. No idea how Jacob would react, though.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next encounter between Ethan and Barlie. :)

Keep up the great work!!!! I can't wait to read more of this story!!!!!!!

I just found this story, and don't know how I could have missed it. I read the entire story, so far, in one go. It's so good! I love it. Can't wait for more!

*rolls around on the floor* He kissed Ethan! They kissed! Yay!!! /fangirl moment.

I am so happy to have read that chapter! I started smiling during the dream and smiled even wider at the end. So, please please update soon! I'm dying here!

About the dream: I completely believed Barlie's reaction. You've already shown that his emotions tend to be intense and all consuming, so it was very plausible that a dream like that would set him off the way it did. Also, I loved the pace of the dream. It flowed so well that I could see it clearly in my mind, which was a *very* good thing. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I really like this. Keep it going!

Aww, they're finally starting to really get along. The scene in the restaurant is definitely my favorite part so far. I just loved seeing them both be so comfortable around each other.

*sighs* Okay, I am bummed that there was no kissing, but I am a patient person. Anyway, it's called UST for a reason, right? ;)