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for The Tale of Jack

by DancingGrimm

person Tahn
schedule November 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I hope you write more like it.
person Tahn
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. Very well done, very sweet. Now I'm hoping for a story about the man in green though. Thank you for the wonderful stories.
person animekid
schedule April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Shoot I love this story. Chapter five and its wonderful. I never thought to see such a common concept turn into something so original.
person AbbyRose
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I didn't really know what to expect from this story, but I have to say I was pleasently surprised, and really enjoyed this retelling of Jack. I don't think i've ever seen a good giant story, and i like how it was connected, but not connected to Little Red.
person Kip
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved your magical tale! It was a long time coming, but more than worth the wait! Thank you for putting such an entertaining story into words... 'Purr
person Kit
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really starting to fall in love with your verse. wonderfull tale!
person UtenaTenjou10
schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the best modern take on a classic fairytale I've read. So glad everyone got a happy ending and that bastard teacher got his!
person Invercio
schedule September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had to register to this site just to tell how much I liked this story. So adorable! Although I was a little unsatisfied because the setting of this story had so many possibilies that went unused. For example I like to imagine Jack sitting on Finn's flaccid cock, and then when Finn gets hard Jack would be lifted up - wheee! Or he could've fucked his urethra. :o Or sat on his face and cummed in Finn's mouth, not having to care where it landed. Or, most importantly, a cum bath! :D
person waterwolf
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"From the other side of the street, in the shadow of a silver birch, a man dressed in an ornate green suit watched the happy group go by. A satisfied smile briefly crossed his face, closely followed by a look of tender sadness..."

OMG Talk about the altimate cliff hanger, no hint as to whats coming next. I do hope you continue this. Please do more of this story and little red with suger, wipped cream, sprinkles, and two, yes 2 cherries on top.
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly cute and sweet story, everything played out exactly how I wished it would. I'm going to start reading your other stories now because this one was just too cute for words.

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