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This was a brilliant piece. As much as i wish it to be longer, it is perfect as it is. I loved the was you made the story fade in and out of Holmes consciousness

I don't know why this hasn't more reviews, it should have, it's amazing! I love how the characters are so unlike them self jet so alike. Every chapter is a joy and a pain to read because it's amazingly written but the story makes me so sad. I really look forward to the continuation.

Wow. That was intense. I loved how you wrote it. It was quite gradual and menacing, the tension was built up really effectively. Your Holmes was different to past representations I've read of captured!Holmes. I liked how you showed him as passive and lost rather than reactive and defiant. Really, really loved it. Hope you write more :o)