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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love your sweet innocent portrayal of Renesmee. Just like in the book. Good job. They're really cute.
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter five made me cry! :)
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA okay its official, i'm in love. i love it. i love you, i love them. great writing! *chapter 6*
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July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more pls! :)
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July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just finished part 4 and am inthralled.... love it... just what i had in mind. :) can't wait to keep reading :)
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! Edward listening to Jacob and Nesmee's thoughts, that is so great. I like how you characterize Jacob, totally perfect. haha ABCDEFG, clever! good ol' Jake. I'm curious to see where this fic goes...
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
haha I can so see Edward having that car! More Alice really, though, doesn't she go for that sort? At first when I was reading this,having Jake and Edward not be rivals and have Edward seem older, weirded me out. But now I like it! I laughed with Edward lending Jacob the car and reading his thoughts and nodding. Jake and Nessie are so cute!
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you list chapter 13 on the pull-down menu as chapter 14. did 13 actually get skipped or is it just misnumbered?
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April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story Can not wait for a new chapter ;)
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April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! cant wait for the next one!