rate_review Reviews

YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!! PLEASSE!!! I absolutely love this premise that they are older and more mature with some sadness, and Edward wants to chase Jacob and Bella enocurages him!!! I think you wrote them well,t hey are mature but still able to joke, they are in cahracter. I love that you gave Bella some backbone and some giving ability, and Edward is similar to how he is in the books ina good way, and I just love how you've written Jacob. Oh please PLEASE write more!!

I LOVE IT!

omg please tell me there are more chapters! This CAN'T just be a one shot! You've got an excellent premise, they've all matured, they are in character. Oh I love it! please please PLEASE write more!

I love Edward and Jacob's teasing...:D