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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was beautiful...
I just wonder what Carlisle said and Bella wasn't able to hear.
Just one tiny idea for improvement: perhaps you could write more about the feelings of the male protagonist. You wrote "I was crying again when he finally stopped"... I think that's a little dissatisfactory for Carlisle. He should really be allowed to have his climax too. I'd love to see him losing his composure.
I just wonder what Carlisle said and Bella wasn't able to hear.
Just one tiny idea for improvement: perhaps you could write more about the feelings of the male protagonist. You wrote "I was crying again when he finally stopped"... I think that's a little dissatisfactory for Carlisle. He should really be allowed to have his climax too. I'd love to see him losing his composure.
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January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
eeeks!!!
finally he f-s her!
finally he f-s her!
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
amazing
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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, damn!
carlisle is the best of em!
carlisle is the best of em!
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More, please! Especially more Jasper (I love him) and Emmett (it's so rare)! I love this fic, it's so well-written but still hot, and interesting and fulfills all the chemistry I saw with Bella and all the male Cullens in one fic. I can't look away!
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update?
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MORE...DEAR GOD MORE!!!!! Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter.
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not my usual thing to read but still amusing none the less and I find myself eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I like how you seem to be giving them each different styles. When people write them as doing the same stuff it just doesn't fit.
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good bit of random rudeness with our favourite characters loving it x
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
Can't wait to see whst emmett has in store for her.
Can't wait to see whst emmett has in store for her.