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vary nice i liked the way this was written . great job :)

This is on of the fics that have kept me on the edge of my seat just to see what the huntsman would do.
I was surprised by how much she was able to take.

I found this site quite by accident and yours is the first story I read. Although it could have been more vulgar and graphic, it does the job. I am so turned on right now, I wish I had a man in the house.

Only one thing to say about this fic.... DAAMMNN! That was... Wow!! That was truly fantastic! LMAO
keep up the good work hun!

alas!! sweetie, you can do better things than writing a sad story of manual of  how to  rape Snow White in the twenty-first century mind.
Perversion has always existed, but with your qualities as a writer to try to stop writing this is waste of skills.
From the point of view of writing bloody or gore, the story stayed shorty, I tell you how I'm reviewing style.
Anyway, nice try, I recommend, you are very good, write what you can do to grow in goodness and truth.
Do not like fairy tales, you can rewrite them, invent legends, you are strong for it: DO IT and do not stop to think that there is not in "used".
If Tolkien had done so, NEVER had written that beautiful legend that enlarges the voids of myths in the UK.
I'm not scolding, I'm encouraging you to follow a narrow track that everyone does not want to.
See you.