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for The Distant Blue

by camp30

person Trubie35
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great writing
Scariest villains ever

I guess im sheltered or just lucky but i don't even understand the hot poker thing
Is that suppose to make it tighter or something
That's sick!

Thanks for writing

person Jeneric
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM

I'm checking everyday for updates . How did the last slave die , is she ever going to escape . I really love this story please update more.


person Kimberly Jones
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
still you seem to keep shocking me. Write more please!!!!!!
person Trubie35
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, intense
I'm not even sure what he's doing with that rod.
I can't imagine how Sookie can survive or how this will end.
You writing style continues to impress.
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh heck she is still falling down that rabbit hole. It seems there is no excape. Great chapter.
Linda
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh This Poor Girl ! Next Chapter Please
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Getting a hot metal rod in her ass twice, I think there would be a lot more damage
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hell! I Would Just Find A Way To End My Life , These 2 Probably Grew Up Together And In A Home Where They Were Tortured And Raped Or Had Sadist For Gaurdians. Next Chapter Please...........
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Shit they are going to kill her. Great chapter.
Linda
person Kimberly Jones
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when Eric rape her it is going to be WAY worse than Alcide. Keep writing. Story is getting interesting.

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