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February 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM
I have only just read your story. I am sorry it's the only one you've put up here - maybe you're not even on here any more.
Anyway, I thought it had promise. You started with a nice creative idea. I'd have liked to see you develop it more. Switch back to Clary and let us in on her wild imaginations. Eventually bring Jace in the room and let your imagination go wild with them both. I think here is not a place to hold back!
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June 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic
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January 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Its really good, but there needs to be more, dose Jace go into her room? if you need any help let me know i love the series.
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March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
why oh why did you stop there!!! Please continue immediately.
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February 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Keep on writing to this; make another chapter! Please.
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November 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update this is a really good fan fiction
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November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
eek! this is great ! You should definitely write more!!!
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September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy smokes! I hope you finish this, because I really like it!
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August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved where your story was going. Would love to see more of it!!!!
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April 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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