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June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Creeeeepy. Well done though.
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October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I enjoyed this story immensely - very well written! :-D
I feel deeply sorry for the children and I wish I knew what happened to the uncle and the murderers... But that is the point of ghost stories -- we don't get to know everything. Just the eerie part, other people witnessed.
I feel deeply sorry for the children and I wish I knew what happened to the uncle and the murderers... But that is the point of ghost stories -- we don't get to know everything. Just the eerie part, other people witnessed.
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May 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like a good ghost story! I haven't really written one - not like that - but I want to. Good job, and good use of the prompts; I had to remind myself what the prompts were, which means they were integrated into the story very effectively.
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April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice and spooky.
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April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is a deliciously chilling little tale, and you kept me on the edge of my seat until the very end. The use of the prompts was deft enough that I had to actually look for them, so seamlessly did you weave them in.
Just lovely! :D
Just lovely! :D