rate_review Reviews

This is amazing.

" You cannot become mortal and I cannot become a god. "

*cough* foreshadowing *cough*

really enjoying this which says a lot. normally I am strictly yaoi , or in this case, twincest. ;)

I think the story is really well written, structurally, functionally, and grammatically, all those blah-technical features are smooth, a nice easy, but not juvenile/simplistic read.
the time lapse is a unique technique.
always looking forward to a new chapter. thanks for all your hard work! :)