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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute little story and I think Micah is under used --I certainly would 'use' him more. Nice to read about Anita having fun without a huge moral problem. You had all the character done well. :)
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well written and funny even if a little short..lol
i dont think you would ever get anita into that pink thing but it was fun imagining her horror
i dont think you would ever get anita into that pink thing but it was fun imagining her horror
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job! it was cute, and funny, and sexy all at once. And you got Zebrowski perfect!
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August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is too cute! Hope you write more soon!
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story was very cute. I hope you write what Anita and Micah did for hours after he caught her. ;>