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schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello

i really feel the sexual tension in the early opening sentences of your story it was so arousing as the coffin hit the ground i hate that bitch madame Giry die horribly i hope she suffered your peice reflects my own poetic masterpeices such as TEMPUS FUGIT AND PAINT BY NUMBERS your words make me feel special were they written with me in mind please read and review my work and you can see our newly discovered similar qualities maybe we are related i wrote this song to make you feel as special as youre work has made me feel well here goes nothin!

" I HOPE YOU DONT MIND I HOPE YOU DONT MIND THAT I PUT DOWN IN WORDS HOW WONDERFUL LIFE IS NOW YOUR IN THE WORLD"

see how talented i am by the way i am very lonely and if your interested maybe we could hook up sometime oh hell ill just admit it I LOVE YOU MARRY ME while i am typing i am on one knee please accept my marriage proposal

Raoulsthong
person Jessyka
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well wear is the rest of it. it is a starting of a good story and should not be stopped there
person LittleWing
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intersting start. It'll be interesting to see where you take it.
person \"Scorp\"
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No name connections, just to start. Although I can guess a fair deal from what you put, and I am rather glad for that I must admit, I hope you write more. I usually don't read this persuasion of story, but I'm open enough I suppose to at least not say anything. It's depressing just how small this section is... I hope it will grow, and I hope you'll continue.
person Katherine
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty cool

please write more
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here I give twice as many reviews as you asked, this is # 6. CONTINUE!
person rachel
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a really interesting story, and I'm anxious to see where you go with it.
person Lengliorla
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And 4. Please continue
person hell
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
three reviews? okay, here comes the big one!! no three!!
looks really promising!! hope ya'll update asap!!
person Nadia
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I like your writing e wee well enough and the story seems to be off to a promising start. ^_^ I'd be interested in more development on the Opera Ghost's point of view, though. I guess this is a fairly small fandom, so I'm wondering whether or not you'll get many reviews. :\ Such a pity, I would like to see more of it.

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